This is good.
I really like when you said
"Deceiving shape - a morbid tune
Echoes within, louder each night;
The master of feelings, controller of all,
Forever dark and nevermore bright..."

Great work.

Always,
Koriey

Comment # 6

interesting structute... the flow was good AGAIN as well as the word choice.. this poem had really great imagery.. definitly 5/5!