This is a really great poem hun i know just how u feel this love thing is crazy just by its self but u put in the distance and its crazy crazy .. i feel like that to like wat if this is all just a lie what am for i am just a pon and his just playing with me? its hard becuase how can we ever be really sure? i guess the only way is to meet and see if its all true or one big lie ...
talk soon
robyn xoxo take care

"Her heart says she loves him
With all her might and soul
Just being in the same room as him
Makes her lose total control"

I think so many people would be able to relate to this stanza.. to this whole poem. I know i could..
Your words were excellent, they really got the emotion of the poem through to the reader..
Brilliant my dear
5/5
*Gem*

This is a beautiful poem Lyndsay. You emotion is felt very strongly by the reader. I can understand the uncertainess of what you are feeling. I hope everything works itself out. Take Care Cindy

Fantastic!
=] Partly because I really am going through these feelings now and they are a little bit scary to me at times. The poem was perfection and couldn't get better. Wonderful job hun, keep it up!

Stephanie