Comments : Control {Cinquain}

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Natalie where have u been! its been ages since i read a poem from u. i think i can relate to this poem.. neway good job on it. keep posting!!! hope u had a happy xmas and all the best for the new year xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Fay

    Wow i really liked this short cinquain good poem and loved the structure ;) good job. Plz read mine and comment im sure u could relate to them .

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very good job. These structured short forms are hard to pull off....you did it. 5/5. Debbie