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  • 17 years ago

    by Emily

    This poem is really meaningful! xo. it good tho cuz thats wat poems are.. ur a really good writer

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    How very sad. You have done a very good job writing this. The enotion can be felt by the reader. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Boy, Can I relate to this.
    I loved this, the wording was fantastic, and I enjoyed the flow.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow this is excellent!
    Great JOB!!!