Beautiful. You definetly have a true talent for poetry. Your work is wonderful!

It was a very sweet poem but I noticed two spots when reading that through off the flow. They were the last lines in stanzas 2 and 3. Just a little hard to read with the same flow is all.
Charisma*

This was so beautiful I really liked this one. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and imagery and I thought the flow was really good.