It been long time you did not post here.....

beautiful penned you potray here dear friend, a bit sad but well expresive emotions...well done!

It is full of pain.Good Work

U r brilliant. I love all ur poems and this one is amazing, really beautiful

Keep it up ;)

Couldnt help but to drop you a line saying that this was a marvelous piece. Well done!

This poem is very heartfelt , each lines seems to depict your unspoken pain ,im glad you have submitted this poem , thank you so much.

Very interesting perception, unique and sad. I love the ending. Very nice job!

Your dry tears and no more amazing poem.
Tum kamal likhte ho. Your pain I can see in you poem. Actually when every I read your poem. It remembered me my sin and how much I did with my love. In your peoms I can see my love pain.

5/5