Okay, who voted this a one???? I mean, honestly I think I've heard this before...well something similar, but it's sweet and to the point, and by no means a one...my goodness. I mean you rhymed and had good flow. So sorry that happened to ya. I'll bump it up a bit.
Charisma*

Awww dats soo sweet. I really liked it. 5/5

I liked it... good rhyme and flow 5/5