Hey, It's been a long time since I've read a poem by you. And now i know why I used to read them so often, over and over again. I remember reading your first few pieces and commenting, and you did the same for me. I just want to thankyou for that, and for this awesome poem that you've written. It seems to create an atmosphere around me as i read it. And the final stanza is chilling to an extent. Great Work

President Dead

Hey Raven. Long time no see. This is a brilliant poem. it's highly emotional and very powerful. i'm sorry i havn't commented in a while, i havn't been online in ages. but yeah, your efforts on this piece are to be commended. really and truly, it's beautifully moving to read. keep writing

-Suz xxx

I like it. its very deep and simple.