Great poem, it's sad, but i love it.
umm... the part where u wrote,
"I want the bullet but the pain"
did u mean, i want the bullet, but Not the pain?
it kinda confuzed me, but this poem is awesome!!! ur a great writer!

*Shawte*

The words you use are unique and perfectly suited for this poem

5/5. very stunning and emotional.

David

A sad poem written nicely. you have a great talent.

I loved the last line;

But I guess life just kinda won

I could feel the pain in those words. 5/5

I like this one ALOTLOT! great job

and i think you messed up here

"..I want the bullet but [not] the pain
I see the clouds but not the rain.."

Ah. Great poem. The way you conveyed everything.. Wonderful. Keep Writing!

This poem is so sad.
Everyone moved on and I'm happy for that
Their life continued while mine did not
that line is so sad! this was a beautiful write another 5/5