Hey, that's a wonderful poem, sad but still so beautiful, it went straight to my heart! keep up the good work!
celi **** 5/5

Very honest, nice expression of emotion, something everyone can relate too. very good, keep it up

Such a sad but beautiful free verse. Written with such emotion. Poetry is a good outlet to express your feelings. Keep writing. Nice job!

Free verse isnt my fave type of poem, i like structure in poems but i liked this one because it was emotional and true.
well done
xxxxxx

Aw.. Well this one was very good. Emotion stuck out through and through. Nicely done. 4.5/5

I loved it. It was so deep. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Aww..I can certainly relate to this poem! I love how you express yourself with Free Verse poems! Great job!
5/5 =)

I like how you expressed your emotion in this poem... i can totally relate! anyways, great job, i can't wait to read your other poems!!

Forever*Yours