Great job. I enjoyed it. Good emotion. Keep up the good work.

Wow midnight....great job. Very nicely done. It was very powerful! This was a very deep emotional piece for you and I hope to see many more like this!
Charisma*

Wow...so powerful and sad, yet such a pleasure to read.
I loved the imagery used in this.
I think you erful job.

It stole some of my text.

*I think you did a wonderful job*

Oh wow... You have a right to be proud of one Midnight.. It's amazing
The sheer emotion in this piece is just... I don't even have the words, lol
You should be very proud of this piece, you explored a deep and hurtful issue and managed to portray it from the point of view most valued..
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

Omgosh.. Wow. This was absolutely amazing. Darn right you should be proud! It was.. wow.. I 'm speechless.. so sad.. & powerful. But, such a pleasure to read. & It wasn't really all that lengthy. Cos it flowed really well.. and the words just kinda, slipped off your tongue. Which made it fast to read. Yet, easy to understand.. & Hard to forget. :] Such a hurtful, depressing issue.. which I'm sure a lot of people have been through. In a strange way.. I can really relate to this. It brought tears to my eyes.. But, I loved it very much.

Amazing job. Keep it up, Hun.

Bri.x

I've read long poems before or at least tried. I'm glad you kept it together even with the length it still kept me interested.

I like the originality of how you ended it.

thank you for the comment on my poem ^_^

love
~Em

Tahnx for the replie and other i really enjoy reading your stuff

Omg this is soooooo sad!!! i really like this one... i felt the pain behind it as i was reading it..great job!

I think I've read and commented this one before. But oh well. I'll do it again if I already did. I loved the flow and I could feel the emotion press into me. Great write. 5/5

Aww, you really expressed your feelings good in this poem! I liked it alot.... it's really well written! Thanks for the comment on my poem "waves of joy".... it means alot! Keep writing... you're good at it :0)! It's a 5/5 for sure!
*Just Lisa*

(*shivers*) incredible! i think that this might be one of my favorites that you have written. so powerful! it really makes the reader believe that you are that girl. i love the letter written to a long lost sister. i definately think this is an amazing piece of work 5/5!

Sad, sad story :(
lovedit :D

I liked this one too i just hope its not a true story

This is a very touching yet a very nice poem keep the nice job up all the best midnight sun

WOW that was a super write , thre poem was very goodand it was well written , a lot of heartache and deep pain felt in it, I can relate to this very well, you did a excellent job, proud of you,, a pleasure to read, ,thanks for sharing ... your friend Tracy 5/5

This was so sad and powerful
i just loved it
im speechless
good job

This was an awesome poem. I loved it.

This is so heartrending and yet so amazing. Awesome job!