This poem is kinda like doctor suess do to the fact that most lines rhyme together. I thought it was done well and kinda had a good little rhythm to it, excellent job 5/5

I enjoyed this, I thought it was cute, and it made me smile.
I thought the flow and rhyme scheme worked very wll togethe, and I thought the imagery you used was great.

Awwwwwwww how sweet..such a happy poem..good job! i like it!

Aww So Cute. it is Dr Seuss Esk. haha. love it. it's great! 5. yea i dont say alot when i like it.

hum the only thing i gotta say is that even though i like it, i hope the others aren't so kidish.. you know? a few like this are cool. but all are kinda annoying.

xx3Lauren

I thought it was sweet 5/5

Great poem!
Keep writing
♥
5/5
~Stephen White

Nice poem Brian... I liked it...you form an imagine in the readers head.... keep up the good work :)