Wow this is a really nice poem!!! can u comment mine!!!!

Hey ur poem is rlly great... wud u mind commenting on mi writtin pieces just search for the author 'beautifulxhate' i got a fair few hope u like

Good poem funny too but i loved it

VERY cute

In response to Natasha's childish comments which offer no real critique:

I have no control over which of my poems goes on the board or how many people view them. I would like all the people who do read my poetry to go and r/r/c Natasha's poems and give her an honest vote and critique on her "Work". LOL

Cute

Aww haha that was so cute!!! well done

much love and many kisses,
bex

Cute! i lov it!!

~shanny~