That was really goodd!!..i liked it!!!...5/5 from me, and i think you should give all the credit to my boyfriend for writing that haha, he even said when he gave it to me that he had never written a poem before, and he was going to write his first one, for his 1st true love... so yeah thanks for the comment!

I'm kind of shocked this poem has only had 1 comment until now for such a great work! 5/5

Nice work...5/5

It was great, i loved it. the way
you put your words together
is simply amazing, and the
imagery was brilliant. nice work
5/5

nikki

the bell rings and he's hit hard with a whack!
he lands on the floor and whispers "i ain't comin back"

loved those lines^^

Aww. I love that poem! I love the champ!! hahaha
Great job
5/5

This is a good poem, but i didnt enjoy it as much at your other poems. It is still a good poem. 5/5

Kalee

Its the kinda poem that gives me goosebump n moistens my eyes...everything I say would be a understatement