I can relate to your poem, but im on the other side of it, may my other half read this one, nice work, keep up the good work!

Jenny what a sad truth when our dreams are better than our reality.
We need to realise so we don't get stung by it in the morning eh.

I think the began in the line 'i began to drift off to sleep..' would flow better if it said begin though because you are talking of the here and now.

Em