You should add song lyrics to this and repost it. I think it would be good.

Aww well that piece is good, I'd love to see the rest..Awesome work!!!

Aww well that piece is good, I'd love to see the rest..Awesome work!!!

Short, but kind and straight-to-the point.

This was cute, you should add more to it though I bet it would be a great song/poem. Short but sweet.