Very heartfelt and full of emotion. Nice flow. It was sadly beautiful. Great job!

I love this one Cindy cos although it has a sad undertone because the character is leaving the world, she is finally able to be with the one she loves and that in itself, it just beautiful
I love it...
5/5
*Gem*

This is very beautiful cindy, i feel the emotions in the poem, great flow, the 5th stanza is my fav, another 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Nicely done Cindy, sad but beautiful. True love never dies!

Nice poem love it could u comment mine ok thank u well later

Hey there was a lot of emotion coming through in this poem. it was beautifully written. a very touching piece xx

Amazing.
Sad, yet so beautiful about wanting to be with the person you love.
Wow, the whole poem was just amazing hun and it couldn't get any better.
Flow was great and your wording was perfect.

The time has come, you say,
No longer will I wait,
You have come to lead me,
To heaven's shiny gate.

^^ My favorite stanza. Don't know why, it's just struck a chord with me. Wonderful job overall hun! Keep it up! 5/5

Take care & stay strong! =]
Stephanie Lynn.

*speechless*

I LOVED THIS ONE! AWESOME JOB!!!

I LOVED THIS ONE! AWESOME JOB!!!

Although this is sad, It's not in a way. Like, knowing that it's something that you want, that you will be with this person, it sounds nice. But i don't mean that in a bad way.. It's hard to explain what i mean. Great poem though. =]

Tammie

Hey Cindy,
Again another awesome poem. So much power and emotionbehind your words, leaves me breathless.
So sadly beautiful.
Love your dear friend, Tara-Kay
xxx

OMG THT WAS SOO GOOD

Awhhh! i loveee it!

Awhhh! i loveee it!

This was a very good read! Enjoyed it very much. Keep up the good work! 5/5

O my this poem is so sad it brought tears to my eyes . i really liked it tho.
5/5. keep writing.
**Kelsey**

That is the best poem i have read in a long time

amy

Lovely words this peom is very touching.
ashleigh

Pure love is limitless