Comments : Unbearable

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem,
    I love this one. Longing through the night for the one you love. Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Loved it! Perfect wording and everything was great!!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Heartfelt message in this one. Good flow. Nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Good job on this one t00. very touching piece hun xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    AH! This is super amazinggg. You have amazing skill, yo! XD

  • 17 years ago

    by megann anne

    Great poem, i really loved, you always do such good work! i am truely inspired by ur poems!

  • 17 years ago

    by 2 Be FoReVr AlOnE

    I MAY NOT KNOW TOO MUCH ABOUT POETRY BUT YOU'VE DONE A GREAT JOB ESP. FOR 3 IN THE MORNING!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    I remember some late nights which have inspired some poetry.

    You're certainly a great writer and your poems are filled with so much emotion.

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow im sure we've all felt that way..nice interpretation...keep it up.

    lis

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Absolutely beautiful. A piece with which most people can relate.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ray

    Beautiful poem. I can empathize with the theme. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by SilentRebuke

    Love it. I have clutched pillows, longing to feel another's touch. you expressed it brillantly.

  • 17 years ago

    by mikayla

    This poem is great!! i love you got talent

  • 17 years ago

    by ChelCBayB

    Wow, Gem i love this poem...you took the words right out of my mouth when i read this...it made me think of my boyfriend...i dont get to see him that often so i clutch my pillows too :) well i love it keep up the great work!
    ~Chelsea~

  • 17 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    This one is cute.

  • 17 years ago

    by madilyn

    I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL!

  • 17 years ago

    by Katlyn

    I know how this is... Its really hard to survive one night away from someone you love so much.. Great job! 5/5