Upon the edge of sanity, There comes a sweet release
A place to lay the heartache down, and finally go to sleep
^^^
I loved these 2 lines Jeannie.

Now, lonely is the heart that waits, upon the bed of hope
Contained within the bitterness that's crushed the very soul.
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And these 2 bring forth the tears.

Your words bring tears with this heart touching piece my friend.

Take care
Luanne

Amazing poem! I absolutely LOVED this piece!!! This was just beautiful and wonderful! I just can't believe how good this piece was. Congrats, on an amazing piece!
Charisma*

What a beautiful poem. I loved every stanza of this! Excellent!

Hey plz check out mi poems and comment and rate them. Yours has rlly touched me

Along with luanne, i loved these two lines:

Upon the edge of sanity, There comes a sweet release
A place to lay the heartache down, and finally go to sleep

This is truly a beautiful piece of art, and very very moving.

This was a great poem, and the words flowed very well. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work!

--Namida

Lonely is the heart that waits, upon the bed of hope

Contained within the bitterness that's crushed the very soul"

the pain is so evident, yet so beautifully portrayed - it speaks of nothing but exceptional talent.

shobhana

I absolutely loved this poem! (Well that's proly obvious since I gave you first place in the contest haha)
You really did a wonderful job with this and it's one of my favourites of your's.