Comments : Wrong

  • 17 years ago

    by Steven

    Hey thats real good. very well expressed and the words flowed nicely.4 sure. hey thanks so much 4 your comments! its nice to hear what people think.very nice.and its so cool that you relate so much to my writting! i love that. so about myspace...just tell me something about you that i can search on myspace so i can find you...like ya zip code---or last name---or whatever---ya know...so thanks again. ttyl

  • 16 years ago

    by Jose Delapaz

    Ouch!! nice poem..................