I don't know why the rating is so low. The only thing that threw me was the unusual rhyme scheme. but I thought it was really good. And I wanted to say THANK YOU for all your incredibly nice and heartfelt comments! They mean so much to me! It's so nice to know someone takes the time to truly let the poetry sink in and appreciate it. I'm glad you liked my poem Almost Asked You To Lie. Thank you!
Charisma*

Wow! I can't believe the low rating...I'm definately giving you a 5/5! This was really good and heartfelt. But I get the impression you're always heartfelt b/c your comments on my poems were just amazing. Thank you so much for them. I can't believe I made you cry! Were you just being nice when you said that??? Lol, jk! :) Thanks for making my day and your poetry really is great! :) :) :)! A lot of talent, keep it up!
~Midnight Sun

A very nicely written sad poem. It's amazing how feelings for someone can cloud your judgement when it comes to them.
You really have a way with words and I enjoyed reading this superb poem.. well done 5/5 xx