Bravo! This is avery well done piece. I really enjoyed reading this!

This was such a good poem. in a way i kinda know how you feel i really like this guy that i have been close to for ever and i am afraid to tell him how i really feel. any ways great job 5/5. keep writing.
**Kelsey**

You had some nice phrases in this poem, the flow was a bit trippy at times but it smoothed itself over in ways. 5/5
*Gem*

(Why was it silly giving it to him if you don't mine me asking, he reads all my poems anyway =/ Does it really matter? He liked it)

This poem is written greatly, you have a nice talent and keeo it up so i could come back and read more of your great work. a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it

Wow, amazing. I loved it. The words you used were great. The flow was good. Keep up the wonderful work.

Peace, Joe