Sad but beautiful. I especially like the ending. Nice job.

It is sad but it has nice rhythm to it...5/5...if you get the chance you should read and rate one of my poems....i think you would like "The Lies" or "Who To Love" the best

Awww Teria *hugs* wonderful poem I wonder who it was for *thinks* 5/5

I like this poem. but honestly. i think that you tried a little to hard for it to sound good. which it does. but rife means "full of" so it doesnt fit into the sentence you put it in. and them and sin dont rhym. little thing that if you took time to look over it would be that much better.