Comments : Captivating Me.

  • 17 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Cute poem hun, short and sweet, good enough to eat. =] Love ya 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Yep,so fine...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Once again. you used rife, and its still wrong. i really like this poem just the fact that you used that word again. and not using it right makes the poem make no sense... if you just edit that little thim the poem would be one of your best.!