Omgosh I love this poem you are good I can so relate right now 5/5 keep up the good work

Hello Ladies. I really like this one. The title drew me in and I enjoyed the poem a lot. My favorite lines are

Bound in these chains
Of frustration and tears
&&
Just before the dawn
You don't seem so far
But wishing for you
Is like wishing on a broken star

Great job! 5/5

Ciao

Hmm, a very good title. It instanstly draws most readers to it because it's unique.
The whole tone of this poem was quite bittersweet and that matched the message perfectly.
The only thing i can suggest is try to keep the stanza's in the same length and rhythm. But i know collabs are quite difficult so 5/5 all the same =)
*Gem*