Very good poem goran, i only seen one mistake and that was on the second line, (nigh) should be (night), but still a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

That was sweet ... :D ..

Hopes are so important in life, if we have nothing to hope for then we feel we have nothing to live for. great job on this piece so true

Hi
its been alittle while since u wrote any poem,, to me it seems very long, but iam very glad that u have...
this is so sad, you know life itself is a game,,,and sometimes a very unfair game..but this poem is welll written..it sound gream accept iam not glad to see how sad your messages are these days..
i wish that once u would write something happy, but its ture one can not write what they don't feel, but maybe someday everything willl change for better, god has his own plan every single one of us.
take care
and iam looking forward to reading more of your poems.

Great poem. Keep up the great work. Another 5/5

Oo i like, another great one of course!

Hope
a simple word that give everyone a reason to live

This poem is very authentic, i cant wait to read more

O.o wow........that was good 5/5

Very nicely written just like all of your works. I do however wish this one was a bit longer, I was just getting into it when it ended. The flow was good as well as the structure. Keep up the excellent work.

Peace, Joe

Great job on your poem. My favorite part was the last stanza.
Whenever I see you,
Everything stops.
This is,
The game of my hopes.
Excellent job! Take Care Cindy

Well it has been some time since I have written, and my ear maybe abit rusty. These hopes and dreams really have no true destination, it just stops it never shows the passions of what you long for it never shows how they are actually are haulted by another person, you just have to use your imagination. This maybe good for those that like to fill in the blanks like some mad lib but, I think if your moved to write on a subject you should write it clear enough so some one can walk away with the idea. Just a thought. Robert....

At some places I found the flow to be a bit rocky, but that's only minor, I liked the third stanza best, I can relate to that so much. Another great poem. =]

Tammie

I really liked this poem. I loved the last stanza. It was all very nicely put. Great read.

marcella