Nice word choice. This flowed good and held a perfect rhythm. Great job!

Err, 2 many big words for me to get it lol

Debbie, You say things like I can't. Your words of beauty.
The things I feel
yet can not say.
You have the mind of a true poet. I am but just your admirer. Excellent work! BRAVO!

Very unique. I love the word choice. Well penned. Another 5/5.

O.k. who voted lower than 5??
Come on own up! Next time get your specs out and the dictionary....out first!
4.5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what is going on?
If you hit the wrong key you are forgiven!! JUST DON'T DO IT AGAIN!!!
Right then adjustment.....5555555555
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Wow.
Loved it, once again.
Your poems, don't need any 'help'.
As, some call it.
Or, critique. Well, not the ones I've read so far.
Amazing Job, Hunni.
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