I like this poem I think it has such a good feeling about it. Relationships are hard.....that about covers that bit. Fix errors up, don't use random capitals, and don't put so many dots in when not needed. That's all, good work.
Joy, Peace and happiness,
Blessed be
ps: thanks for my comment)
=)

I loved this! i really did! i can relate!

Grt poem i like the way u had expressed ur feelings in that..5/5