That is such a sweet poem David! I thought it was so clever how you had the five stanza's starting with I, Will, Always, Love, You. That was awesome. Great concept, flow and use of emotion, as always. Keep them coming and you will be sure to see me commenting. =] Thanks for your comment on my poem, it's much appreciated.
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Tammie

This is a beautiful poem. Your confessions of love are beautiful! Excellent job!

Wow, that was brilliant. The flow and the feeling created an experience for the reader. I could almost reach out and touch the emotion; it was that real and heartfelt. Great job and keep up the good work.

A brillant way of describing love! 5/5

Real talent here!!
really good write with feeling!

That was great. How you did that with Goodbye I Will Always Love You, so beautiful.

That was so clever how you wrote i will always love you
this was great i could honestly feel every bit of emotion that you felt when writing this it was just excellent
5/5