I love the flow to this poem,and this is indeed strange feelings!its a beatifully sad poem and its moving.i love it,and i hope u wil keep ur chin up,and frustrating and hurting as it is,dont u let it continue to bring you down!

Great poem. The flow was indeed good and just the overall feeling makes the reader experience the words more than just read them. Great job.

Really gr8 words!

God bless u

I just want to say thanks for all people they gave me realy good comments i praise them all.and yeh i will keep it on.