Comments : Unreal Beauty [Senryu]

  • 17 years ago

    by Dana

    Wow this is another beautiful poem. So real a dancer's fantasy! I have alot of trouple writing in this form, it's hard for me to get something of substance across...but you! You have done that plus more! Even though it's short, there's so much behind it and a mental image comes up immediatly...which makes this poem what it is. WONDERFUL 5/5