Thats not a poem mate but nice intension

I disagree with Darko. It is a poem, a poem can be in any structure or form and it doesn't have to be full lines or in verse.
I liked it. I thought it showed seduction very well
5/5
*Gem*

Nice poem ;) great styles u have

melissa

I like it. It is indeed a poem, written in an Acrostic style as well.

Nice job. ^_^