Ei..nice poem you have here..i really liked it..keep up the gud work..mwahz

Ei..nice poem you have here..i really liked it..keep up the gud work..mwahz

Good job! You can feel the frustration in your words.
No one believes your stupid lies
Stop making me look bad.
This was my favorite lines. Something I wish I could say to someone.

About the first break up poem I can relate to :(. Sooo sad! lol, It was really good and the rhyming and flow were great!
xoxo

Wow the message so strong
love it...

It was good. I like the emotion behind it.
"Right from the very start"

I would take out "very" to clean up the flow. I felt like the 7th and 8th lines didn't flow right either, but didn't figure out how to fix it. Anyhooo...just suggestions.
And I thought it was totally sweet you said I was your fave poetess. That SOOO made my day!
Charisma*

This is an excellent poem

Love the ending, this stuff is so true..wow amazing stuff.

lissa

I liked it. I can also relate and you get your point across. Good work :)

I love this poem!! i feel exactly the same way!

This is absolutely great. I love your work, you do such a nice job on everything you do. Another great write. *5/5

O wow that is like amazing.. i love it.. cuz im totlay kinda going threw the same thing..

5/5

I believe you showed every person who has broken up and picture of themselves.That is a good qualitly in an artist.Gret job,ma doux

Gr8 poem gem,, i rele like ur poems,, u should show them to a proffessional,, u could go rele far!!

THiiS POEM iiS SOO PRETii! Mii COUSiiN COULD REALLii RELATE TOO THiiS POEM! 5/5
I LOVED iiT!

I can so relate to this poem..it's hOTT..keep up the gOOg rite...

This is amazing.
good job.
5/5

Lei è eccellente{ur writing is exccellent} : )

I think this poems is awesome too... It basically describes what my friend should do about her relationship. I love it, great job ^^ 5/5