Gem,
I think we all have had someone in our life that has betrayed our trust! What a bad feeling. Excellent write.

Hey darl a powerful poem. i think this is a poem everyone can relate to. xx

Beautifully written......easily relation to....comes from the hart.....what more could the perfect poem need? keep writing chica!

Great poem hun! I loved that! It was soooo good! And I can relate most definitely! Great job babe!
xoxo

Very good flow. Once again, what does this mean? 19/02/06 Oh wait! Is it the DATE first like feb. 19, 2006??? Just wondering, never really saw it written like that before. Anyhoo...good poem!
Charisma*

+.+ And sadly, this is true, friends who betray our trust +.+

It is a shame that people pretend to be a friend but I am sure it has happened to everyone once or twice it is a shame tho.

I know how it feels to have someone betray
you but an amazing poem i must say. you have so much meaning in your poems and it is shocking
great poem
-chelseaa;

Congrats on your 2nd place win in the Erotic contest

Ive been burned like that before too, you know its true falling feels like flying untill you hit the ground and nothing is more painfull then friendly fire :(( another great poem :)

In the first four lines too many yets leave one out also avoid but it takes awy from the flow of ur poem here.

lissa

Very nice. I liked this a lot. It flowed really well, and conveyed a lot of emotion. Nice job.

Great poem. I had so many "Best Friends" stab me in the back too. I hope you find the true one i know i have.
xoxoxox
jess

Whoo! i like this poem its kind of edgy and i can relate to it

Whoo! i like this poem its kind of edgy and i can relate to it