Comments : ThE EsSeNcE oF LiFe Is YoU

  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    I'll admit that there are a few loose ends to this poem. But I believe it deserves more then the rating it got. The flow was kind of rocky because there are a few words and stanzas that you should work on. Other then that I think that it had emotion and imegery. I give it a 4/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    I thought decided to give you a five for effort. lol

  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    Hey not to sound creepy but...
    im not sure if u even come on anymore but i saw u in tawnis favorite authors and knew who u were so i thought id read some of your stuff
    this is a good poem a lot of feeling and i like hte way its structured
    gud job =)

  • 15 years ago

    by Nawa

    Sweet !! a lovely well written poem. Good job.