Comments : Precious Name

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a wonderful piece of poetry. This is so well written. The beauty of your words touched my heart. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    This such a different and beautiful poem. What a breath of fresh air!

    But nonetheless you require not,
    an empty voice of me,
    Or my lingering mind to please.
    You ask, "have you forgot"
    Love requires no jewel nor plea,
    Just the faint call of geese.

    This stanza is outstanding! Great write....hope to read more from you! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    This was beautiful, keep up the good work! 5/5

    ~jas~