I LOVE it, you have talent.

Awwwwww. This was so beautiful! It almost brought tears to my eyes. I wish a man thought like that about me. Your girl must be very lucky. Great poem!

I like it...And the other poems too. I was reading them, and some are a bit confusing, but they are still ready good. =)

I really like your poem i think it is reallly good i think that, that girl is soo lucky to have some1 like you likeing her

The whisper of your voice
The warmth of your touch
So many little things
Make me love you so much
^^ If someone felt that about me i would drop dead! That was amazing i loved it! And like the others said...Your girl has to be pretty darn lucky to have you! great job and keep it up! ~peanutt~

That was such a grat poem. feelings are defined very well in this poem. flow was also very good. an excellent pic of love. gr8 wrk.