Hey keep up the good work thanx for commenting mind it means a lot

Excellent keep it up! thanks for the comment. let me knw what u think of the rest of my stuff.

Heyy!!....Great write!...it's very well penned!...very beautiful peice of wrk!...i'll chek out more of ur woks...Welcome to this site!...u r very talented!...Kp it up!..
xxPoojaxx

It has its ups and downs....above average poem...=D
this part stuck with me...

let's run until our shoes wear down
until our bloody feet
mark the ground

the ending could be better...but in general a great poem...a 5/5 from me...;)

Hey this one is also pretty good.......again itz simply beautiful......i love it........i know what u mean it.........please comment on some of my new poems if u want to =D