Comments : Can't believe

  • 17 years ago

    by ephemera

    "All I hope Is that you make the right choice and stay.
    Because I know you don't want to stay away.
    And if you stay I hope we never depart.
    Because forever you'll be engraved in heart."

    That was beautiful and describes exactly how I feel about the one that I love. Your poem is very lyrical, almost like a song, a song that you must have been thinking about for a long time because it was so thoughtful and honest. It felt as if it came from your heart and I really admire how you use words.

    Astryd