Cindy I enjoyed this collaboration with you. It's been a pleasure writing this poem with you....not only as my sister, but also as a talented poetess. ( I mean you not me) ha ha I give you a 5/5

That's really sad, but very astounding. I really loved it. You wrote beautifully and the rhythm was great (I have a problem with poems without rhythm) you did very well. 5/5

Such a wonderful piece and a wonderful collab.
So this is what you get when you throw two extremely talented people into the mix eh? lol
Definitly a 5/5 =)
*Gem*

This is a really good poem cindy, i like collaboration poems and you and debbie did a great job, i wish my sister could write, lol, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

This was really good Cindy, I really enoyed this one by you, really beautifully written.
Thank you so very much for your comments on mine,
Love your dear friend, Cindy
xxxxx

Typing error, I'm a little tired, I meant to write, Your dear frend, Tara-Kay

This is so good and incredibly touching. Wow. great job!

Wow! Excellent Collab! I love the deep and strong emotion, the flow, and the vivid imagery as well. This was very, very well-written! I love it!
5/5

Well done ladies.

Hey ur poem is rlly great... wud u mind commenting on mi writtin pieces just search for the author 'beautifulxhate' i got a fair few hope u like

Beautiful collab from 2 beautiful and talented poets. You guys did an excellent job!

Wow.. a really heartfelt poem.. its soo sad it gave me goosepumbs.. amaazing job ..

This was beautiful.
The imagery used was excellent.
You both did a wonderful job on this!

Awww that's a good one but very sad. I liked the strong ending well done xxxx