Thats gorgeous.
God, i really really hope she see's sense soon hun, cos i can tell in your words just how much she means to you. And i'll give you a clue... it's a lot! lol
Beautiful poem as usual!
5/5
*Gem*

Aww this girl should realise soon that she has a good man there for her,
was a really lovely poem obv you feel alot for her =]
~*~Jen~*~

This was so sweet and special i just adored it to bits
the flow was great and it was so original which is one of the main things i luv about this poem
5/5