Absolutely fantastic i love this poem xwell done

Ohhh I adore this poem!
The opening stanza really pulled me in, and from there on it just kept getting better and better.
Flow was flawless throughout, imagery used created vivid pictures and I found the ending to be very intense.

Again-absolutely beautiful!!!!!!!!!!
We're the same age-i wish i could write like you do.
The rhythm, the emotion, the story-its fantatic darl!!!

You're very talented-keep writing!
xoxo