Its so.... I dont know how to say... expressive is the only word I can find, niiice job =)

Debbie this is so beautiful! My heartaches for you. I know how a lonley heart feels. I know one day you will be with your love. This piece is so well done. Your talent astounds me. Love you !

Your name invokes a melody,
My heart hums in your embrace;
The lyrics of our song are penned
As I gaze upon your face.
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^^ Beautiful words. This poem was just amazing. I love every line of it. Excellent write!

-` Poetess

Awesome write. nicely done

Although I love the poem in its entirety, this stanza is my favorite:

"Your name invokes a melody,
My heart hums in your embrace;
The lyrics of our song are penned
As I gaze upon your face."

Beautifully penned. Impeccable rhythm and rhyme! 5/5

Another wonderful write by a wonderful poet. The flow and strucutre both great, As well as the words you used within this poem. Excellent Job.

Peace, Joe

Time reveals all...

Love it

This is beautifully written, this is my fav part:

Your name invokes a melody
My heart hums in your embrace
The lyrics of our song are penned
As I gaze upon your face

I love the description in this stanza, it paints such a beautiful picture.

Debbie.......so beautiful