This brought tears to my eyes..
So sad, yet so beautifully written...and something I can relate to.
The wording and imagery were excellent and the whole thing flowed really well.

Awwww this is a very sad poem. but i'm not sure what it's about.. either someone dying or someone leaving you.. you should added that in there what happen.. cause you dont really say.
but you did an amazing job on writing it. i liked the rhyming in it. great job you did! 5/5

~Kristina

This was very sad, and I felt such emotion and pain. Excellently written.

Explaining the feeling regrat and so heart aching,5/5

Awesome job =]

the flow was perfect. its so sad =[

No its not that confusing but it is nice i like this one too 5/5

This one was sad... even i felt like crying 5/5!!!1