ill tell you what i like it. becuz it kinda remindedme of my moms x up till the end with runing in and hugin him lol but keep writeing you'll do realy good one day.

Thank you all for your encouraging comments. I'll keep the poem and keep writing some more. Hope to read some of your poems, too.:)

Your poem is very good keep up the good work. I know that it's hard sometimes for people to realize that love is there but poems like yours helps people realize it is.......it's everywhere, well good job, and good luck to you in the future. Please read and comment on some of my poems. Thanks