I loved this!!
I liked the imagery and wording, and I thought the rhyme scheme worked well.
I thought the flow was off on the last line but apart from that you did a wonderful job.

Truely amazing. i can relate to it alot. i dn't know what to say. i lke it alot. 5/5
love willow xxoo

I see no reason I'm alive;
There's no point anymore.
So let me go;
Let me fall to the floor.

such strong lines. i loved all this poem. well done!

5/5 David

The meaning of this poem was simple yet it was SOOOOOOOO deep. you feeel like this person is just so anxious just to let go and give up :( good job .......keep up the good work!