Such Passion! A highly erotic poem that certainly get's the pulse racing!
Top drawer stuff.

Your poetry speaks of the beauty of passion and celebrates the idea that love is also physical as well as emotional.

Wow this is very good, i like how it flows well, definetly doesnt make you studder as you read, 5/5

Jackie, jackie, jackie,how did i ever miss this one??????!!!!!!!! i'm glad i'm at home and not a work!! 5/5

Wow Jackie, love this poem, sooooooooo adulterous and now i need a cold shower, lol, xxP

This is so hot I nearly got burned!!!
You are the Queen of erotic poetry!

Wow. I really liked this shows how deeply in love they are, 5/5. Em x

Well this is quite a fantasy. Really nice work. Like the way your points flow, one leading to another building the general concepts of a steamy love session.

Bloody Hell Jackie, I just knackered my laptop, i had to read this one in the shower[cold of course,lol]cheeky...Xp