Gem, This was very funny. If it had not been in the humor. I would have thought you were writing of Marcus. Excellent! Take Care Cindy

HEE HEE. IM OFF TO GRAB ONE!
SUCH A FUN WRITE

KELLY
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Love it! Some humor in my life! Thanks hun! Great job on this one!
xoxo

I love Chocolate :))) next to girls its my other weakness :)) and very well put eating it is pure heaven :)))

I didnt find this funny at allo, its touching and i know what u mean. wow nice jobb.

lissa

Comment #4:

This is SO funny b/c all the stanzas except the last one actually sound romantic, lol!!! I mean talking about snuggling and all that...and it's warm caress, heehee. You did really good! :)
~Midnight Sun

LOL!!! hot chocolate rocks! haha .. very cute poem.. nice flow as well

Lord
so funny... ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ....

i will collapse now!!!

keep the good worh

ha ha ha ha ha a a

Wow that was so so funny. you are really creative for stuff to write about. 5/5 of course since there is no higher i can give you.

xx.chelsea.xx

ps. thanks for the sweeet comment gem. yes i am lucky and for that poem i didn't think it did matter so I decided to write it with out rhyming. how are you doing hun?

LOL This was great... I love hot chocolate but my fave is cadbury's. You described the feeling of drinking it superbly and I had no idea what You were talking about until the last stanza.
The rhythmn and flow were excellent once again, well done 5/5 xx