I love the way you describe the seasons in this write. This was so nice to read! Cindy

See this is why i love your poems i always learn something new "Cinquain " not to use it in a sentence lol :)))

Ive down this with colos its called Rainbow...i think lol. ice job hard to do

lis

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Heehee, I loved the ending...it almost rapped the end back to the biggining without repeating anything. Great job once again :)
~Midnight Sun

So im not a fan of nature poems.. but this is beautiful it has great flow.. i reallty like the whole structure of the poem.. !!

Very creative.I really liked your poem and the words were well placed and well put. I look forward to reading more of your works this year, both new ones and ones you already have listed on the site… Keep up the good writes. Bravo!!

Lovely job babesy! I loved it! And also...No problem. I heard what you went through and I just had to write something for you. I'm glad you liked it. :]
xoxo

By the way...sorry to bring my pain up while you're in pain but Jake asked out my best friend and she's gonna say yes. :[ Everytime I listen to a break up song, I cry. :[ So sadd!
xoxo

One Word "WonderFul", Reminds me Of A Rainbow For Some Reason =S, Anyhow I Love It, To Write A Poem About The Seasons Is A Beautiful Way To Go..=), and Sorry About Your Nana, I Know I Said It Before In Your Other Poem "More Than Just A Nana" But Who Cares..Your Nana Is Probably Watching Over You..=)

Brilliant indeed, i wonder how i survived w/o reading ur poems.. :o)

Missed u a lot

all the best and take care

A very nice Cinquain... I find different styles of poetry tricky to write but You have made this look easy and have described the seasons beautifully... Well done 5/5 xx