Gem,
Another beautiful piece of formed poetry from you. I can only admire these. Excellent! Your friend Cindy

Wow your really getting to grips with all the different types of poems, that was really good =]
5/5 as always.
~*~Jen~*~

Wonderfully penned Gem with an incredible message also.

I love the Etheree, it is such a fun form to write.

Wonderful read as always Gem

Take care
Luanne

Awesome jobband its tone was amazing..

lissa

Comment #1:

Man! So beautiful! I'm really looking forward to commenting on your poems for the contest ... sorry btw for how long it took. But you really are an amazing poet! This poem is really great and it paints an amazing picture...keep it up, Gem! :)
~Midnight Sun

Wow.. i like this poem ALOT!! its written really well AMAZING JOB! but you have a type "cos" is spelled c"ause"

Well crafted, and a breath of fresh air in all the turgid crap about how life sucks. I'll be reading more of your stuff, for sure. :-)

I have read loads of your poem and they are really good...I enjoy reading them...Well done!

(for contest)

this poem was well written, at some points the flow was a little shaky, but all in all it was well done.

-/2 Terra

ps- sorry it has taken me so long to judge this contest. I've been tied in family affairs

Very creative.
I'll try it sometime.
You can count on it.
-Animus

What a beauty and thank you for your comment and support!

Light is just like a Hope & it both plays a very vital role in our life. Glad to read something on it......its nice to be back after such a long time and finding you still rocking.. ;o)

all the best and take care

Wowie. that way to write a poem sounds so confusing lol. but you really pulled it off amazingly. 5/5